Master Fiction Writing

What makes some characters instantly compelling to one another? Sometimes it isn’t vulnerability, physical attraction, or even conflict. Sometimes it’s the moment one character looks at another and thinks: Oh. You’re good.
In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I explore the Hawksian woman, the confident, capable, quick-witted female character associated with the films of director Howard Hawks, and ask what this classic Hollywood archetype can teach contemporary fiction writers about creating characters with agency and relationships with genuine chemistry.
Using examples from To Have and Have Not, His Girl Friday, Much Ado About Nothing, Pride and Prejudice, Star Wars, The X-Files, Killing Eve, Mad Max: Fury Road, The Hunger Games, Firefly and more, we’ll look beyond the archetype itself to uncover the storytelling principles underneath it.
We’ll explore why competence can be attractive, why banter alone doesn’t create chemistry, how characters earn one another’s respect, and why some of the best relationships are built through mutual reassessment. We’ll also look at the limitations of the traditional Hawksian woman and how writers can take what works about the archetype without falling into the tired idea of the woman who earns respect simply because she’s “not like other girls.”
There’s also a practical exercise to help you examine an important relationship in your own story. You’ll identify what your characters initially believe about one another, find the actions that force them to reconsider those assumptions, and explore what becomes possible in the relationship as recognition turns into trust and intimacy.
Because sometimes the most powerful relationship progression isn’t:
They hated each other. Then they fell in love.
It’s:
They learned how to operate together.
And sometimes the most romantic words in fiction aren’t I love you.
They’re I trust you.
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A magic system. A monster. A machine. A prophecy. A portal. A ghost. A dystopian regime. An impossible world.
Speculative fiction often begins with a brilliant what if? But the idea becomes a story when that impossible thing collides with something deeply human.
This episode of Master Fiction Writing is an audio version of my presentation for the WorldShift summit for speculative fiction writers. In it, I explore how to move beyond the “cool premise” and discover the emotional pressure hiding inside your speculative idea.
We’ll look at The Human Cost Framework and six elements you can use to connect premise and character: The Impossible Thing, The Human Desire, The Pressure Point, The Cost, The Choice, and The Change.
Along the way, you’ll learn how to:
identify why this protagonist belongs in this speculative story;
find the vulnerable place where your premise and character collide;
give magic, monsters and technology emotional consequences, not simply rules;
turn enormous external stakes into intimate personal ones;
create choices in which every available option costs something;
and use the speculative element itself to drive character transformation.

Whether you write fantasy, science fiction, horror, dystopian fiction, paranormal fiction, magical realism or something that cheerfully refuses to sit in any one genre box, this episode will help you ask a deceptively simple question:
Don’t ask only what the impossible thing does. Ask what it costs.
FREE DOWNLOAD: The Human Cost Map
Use the framework from this episode with your own story.
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Romantasy is everywhere right now. Dragons, fae courts, morally grey love interests, spectacular special editions - and sales figures that have made the publishing industry sit up very straight indeed.
But what’s actually driving its extraordinary appeal?
In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I take a deep dive into the rise of romantasy: what the term means, where the genre came from, why authors such as Sarah J. Maas and Rebecca Yarros have become publishing phenomena, and why BookTok alone can’t explain what’s happening.
More importantly, we look beneath the trend at the storytelling machinery.
Strong romantasy often runs on two interconnected engines: an external fantasy story involving danger, power, conflict or survival, and an intimate relationship story involving desire, trust, vulnerability and belonging. When those engines genuinely affect one another, the result can produce extraordinary narrative momentum.
And that principle has plenty to teach you even if the chances of a dragon appearing in your current manuscript are approximately zero.
Along the way, I explore yearning and delayed gratification, romance tropes, reader promises, emotional causality, world-building with consequences, series storytelling, “spice”, the dangers of decorative fantasy and bolted-on romance, and why bigger stakes aren’t necessarily better stakes.
You can also try a few simple exercises while you listen:
• Name the two engines in your own story: what is your protagonist trying to achieve externally, and what do they want emotionally from another person?
• Look for interaction: find a moment when something happening in the plot changes an important relationship - or when that relationship causes your protagonist to make a different plot decision.
• Identify the anticipation: ask yourself what your reader is currently waiting, hoping or dreading will happen, and whether your story is actively building towards that payoff.
There’s also a free companion workbook, The Two-Engine Test: A Story Development Workbook, which takes these ideas much further and helps you apply them directly to your own novel.
Download the workbook HERE.
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Sometimes the best edit you can make to an emotional scene is to delete the sentence that explains why it was emotional.
In this episode of Master Fiction Writing, I’m looking at a habit I see surprisingly often in manuscripts: a writer creates a strong emotional beat through behaviour, dialogue, silence or physical detail... and then immediately explains what the character is feeling.
The trouble is, that explanation can rob the original moment of its power.
We’ll explore why writers often don’t trust what they’ve already put on the page, how emotional over-explanation stops the reader from participating in the story, and why your characters don’t always need to understand their own feelings with the precision of a trained therapist. We’ll also look at why “show, don’t tell” isn’t really the rule you need. The more useful question is: are you telling the reader something you’ve already successfully shown them?
Choose an emotional scene from your manuscript and look for places where you’ve written:
behaviour → explanation
dialogue → explanation
physical sensation → explanation
image → explanation
Temporarily delete the explanation and read the passage again.
Does the reader still understand enough?
Not everything. Enough.
You may discover that the behaviour, dialogue or image was already doing all the work - and that the explanatory sentence was simply getting in its way.
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What does this story want because this character is queer?
That’s the question at the heart of this special episode recorded for ProWritingAid’s Write with Pride event.
Too often, queer characters are present in a story without their queerness meaningfully shaping what they want, what they fear, what they risk or who they become. Representation matters, but great fiction goes one step further by allowing identity to influence the emotional and structural movement of the story.
In this webinar, I introduce The Queer Story Engine: a practical five-part framework built around Desire, Danger, Belonging, Visibility and Change. Together, these elements help writers create queer characters whose identities are woven into the fabric of the narrative rather than simply named on the page.
Whether you’re writing fantasy, historical fiction, horror, romance, literary fiction or something entirely your own, this episode will give you practical revision questions you can apply immediately.
In this episode you’ll discover:
• Why representation and story integration are not the same thing.• How queerness can become a genuine source of plot, stakes and emotional movement.• Why queer joy can be every bit as powerful a story engine as conflict or danger.• How the same framework works across different genres and worlds.• A simple revision exercise you can return to throughout your writing process.

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Happy writing.